Monday, December 3, 2012

Evan Radley, Teenage Rogue



Evan Radley, Teenage Rogue
I’m done with school, so I walk home. As I approach my house, instantly I know something is wrong. The garage door is covered in gunshot holes. I dash up the steps and rip the front the front door open. I see a trail of blood leading toward the basement. Slowly, I make my way toward the basement. I grip the doorknob. Carefully, I turn the knob. I open the door and see a sight I will never forget. A strange man is standing over my mother’s dead body and is sawing away at my now dead father’s neck. Then he looks up at me and smiles. Then in a flash het throws the knife. I do a backflip over the knife and catch it mid-flip.

“You wouldn’t understand, I’m just that cool,” I jeer at him.
The man makes a run for it. Luckily I have ninja reflexes. I dash after him, knife still in hand. He kicks down the front door and keeps running. I hurdle the door. Suddenly he stops, and before I know it he flings a knife in my direction. I run towards the city, hoping to avoid too much attention. A knife flies over my head and I grab it. I fling it over my head and it lodges in an old man's skull. I hurdle a trashcan and run down an alleyway. I hear sirens as I run up a wall. I jump from roof to roof running as fast as I can. I come to the edge of town and leap off the building. I run to the woods on the outskirts of town.

I find some wood and chop it up to build a small fire.  I huddle next to the fire for an hour. Eventually, I decide that I should build a lean-to for shelter before it gets dark. I get up and survey the surroundings.  I see a lot of trash lying around, so I sift through it. I grab an old tarp, some charred plywood, and a few old shovel handles. I fashion a small hut leaning against a tree. I climb inside and slowly drift off to sleep.

I wake to the sound of twigs snapping. I shrug and assume that it is just an animal. I go to get some food out of my pack and I hear the sound again. I crawl over and I peek out of a hole in the tarp. I look left and see a leg. Worried that it is a policeman, I grab a nearby stick and whack the leg as hard as I can. Much to my surprise, the stick snaps on his leg. The person doesn't cry out either. I crawl out with my hands in the air. I look up at the figure. It is a man that appears to be in his 30's. He has a short beard that says that he probably is homeless. I heave a sigh of relief as it is not a policeman.

"What are you doing outside my hut," I question harshly.
"I was curious as to why you were living here," the man said honestly.  
"Well, why are you out here?"
"Because I'm a freakin' hobo!" the man yells.
"Well, then why do you think that I am living out here?"
"Because you are a hobo?"
"WRONG! Some idiot killed my parents," I explain.
"I just killed two adults yesterday," the man boasts.
"Did you saw their heads off?" I question.
"Yes, as a matter of fact I did," he said.
"MY NAME IS EVAN RADLEY AND YOU KILLED MY PAPA AND MAMA, PREPARE TO DIE!!" I grab a pitchfork and charge. The man tried to say something but I didn't give a crap. I shove the pitchfork through his neck.
"I didn't kill your parents, you idiot!" 
"Oh... whoops my mistake I hope you don't go to hell," I say not very sympathetically. I run away before anything else happens.

Later in the story, Evan finds out that the man he stuck a pitchfork into, didn’t die. His name was Marcus. Later they become friends.

Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Evan Radley

My Character

Evan Radley
Tall
male
jet black hair
red & black lightning striped converse high-tops
green skinny jeans
purple striped shirt

Quote from Evan, "You wouldn't understand, I 'm just that cool."

Excerpt from the story:
I'm done with school, so I walk home. As I approach my house, instantly I know something is wrong. The garage door is covered in gunshot holes. I dash up the steps and rip the front door open. I see a trail of blood leading toward the basement. Slowly, I make my way toward the basement. I grip the doorknob. Carefully, I turn the knob. I open the door and see a sight I will never forget. A strange man is standing over my mother's dead body and is sawing away at my now dead father's neck. When he look up at me he smiled. Then in a flash he threw the knife. I ducked then did a backflip. I gripped the knife. 
"You wouldn't understand, I'm just that cool," I jeer at him.
The man made a run for it. Luckily, I have ninja reflexes. I dash after him, knife still in hand. He kicks the front door down and keeps running. I hurdle the door. Suddenly he stops, and before I know it there is a knife in my side. I cry out in pain and fall to my knees. I grip the other knife I was holding and fling it at the man and see him die instantly before it goes black.

That is the end of the preview.

Wednesday, November 7, 2012

DEFEAT


“Defeat”
By
Jacob Edmunds


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Scene one
In the lunchroom, April is wreaking havoc.
April
Hand over your lunch money.
john
Why should I? (Defiantly)
April
Uh…because if you don’t I’ll teach you a lesson.
john
About what, manners? (Slowly walking back)
April
About having a broken nose!
          APRIL raises her fist.
john
Fine, here it is! (Cowardly)
          JOHN hands his lunch money to APRIL. APRIL snatches it out of his hand. JACKSON watches from a few tables away.
Jackson
I’m going to stand up to her! (Brave)
Michael
You’re on your own.
Brady
Yep.
JAckson
WINK I hope SUMMER’s watching.
          JACKSON walks toward APRIL, but slips on a banana peel. SUMMER catches him and he blushes.
summer
Are you ok?
jackson
Yeah… (In love)
          JACKSON gets up and walks over to APRIL.
Jackson
You know that’s mean to steal people’s lunch money.
                  APRIL
          You tellin’ me whats to do? (Girly)
                  JACKSON
          Yeah! Whaddaya think? (Bratty)
          APRIL punches JACKSON in the face.
                  JACKSON
          Oww, why did you do that? (Silly)
          JACKSON grabs the money back and hands it to JOHN.
                  JOHN
          Thanks.
                  JACKSON
          Anytime. (Coolly)
                  APRIL
          Excuse me. (Girly)
          JACKSON grips an orange. He turns and flings it right at April.
                  
          APRIL punches JACKSON and it goes black.
                 The End

Friday, October 12, 2012

Leonidas, The Brave Warrior

Leonidas, The Brave Warrior
October 27
           Rome is really powerful. They are so powerful that they have taken over most of Europe. We as Greece have to stop them. We are the only country left that Rome hasn't taken over. If Rome takes over, then obviously all is lost. Julius Caesar will rule Europe. I can tell you that is not good. We will have new laws enforced that will pay taxes to Caesar. He will charge ridiculous amounts of money to use at his own will. 

October 31
           Eusebios and I both like the same girl. Her name is Demetra. Her eyes are like the sea. She has beautiful black hair. Eusebios challenged me to a duel. Whoever lost would have to go talk to Demetra. We both drew our wooden training swords. Whoever hit the other person 15 times first, won the duel. We dueled until the score was tied 14 hits for me 14 hits for Eusebios. He had called my name  tauntingly. Then he whacked the helmet off my head. He swung to hit my vulnerable head, but I ducked under his swing and easily tapped his shoulder. “15 hits for me,” I jeered. “Now you have to talk to Demetra.” Eusebios then grinned in defeat.
November 5
       Eusebios finally talked to Demetra today. She told him that if he won the upcoming chariot race that she was his. Her parents agreed that it was a good deal. Now, Eusebios is really nervous. He really wants to win that race. The problem is that he has never driven a chariot before. Secretly, I want him to take 2nd place, so that I get Demetra. I’m not going to tell him that though. The chariot race is in 2 weeks. Eusebios is going to have some intense training in the upcoming weeks.

November 8
       My father is the leader of the army. The Romans have announced that they are gong to attack us. They are charging toward Sparta as I write. I just hope that my dad will be safe. He thinks that this is the battle that we will finally win. I hope so. Well, I can hear them coming. I have to go.

November 11
       So far the war is not going very well. We have been pushed so far, that they can take any house. If we fight back we should be able to hold our position. We know what their weakness is. They won’t know we are coming if we attack them from behind. Our plan is to attack from behind early tomorrow morning. If all goes well, we can drive them back to Rome. We will have time then to make another plan and train to pull off the plan.

November 13
       Our plan worked, until my dad got injured. His leg has a gash that is to the bone. He is in a lot of pain right now. He probably won’t be able to fight again. Other than that huge loss our plan was successful. We drove the Romans out of Greece. They will have to regroup. I will practice leading the army. In one week we are going to attack the Romans.



November 19
       Today is the big day. Eusebios is racing in the chariot race. It is very important that he wins, because of he takes 1st then Demetra is his. He has been training hard for this race. I have been training hard also. We are attacking the Romans tomorrow. I am confident that we can do some damage. Eusebios just arrived at my house. We are going over to the race together.

November 20
       Eusebios was killed in the chariot race last night. He was in a heated race to the finish line. Between 3 chariots it was tied. As they rounded the last turn, Eusebios’ chariot hit a rock and spun off course. His chariot collided with the chariot to the left of him. Eusebios was flung from his chariot and onto the track. The other two chariots, too competitive to stop ran right over Eusebios’ limp body. I am furious that they didn’t just go around him. Besides that shocking news, the other news is that we have set up camp on a ridge overlooking the Romans’ camp. We have changed plans and are going to attack at noon. We are having a quick training before we leave for our positions. I must now gather my troops.

November 23
       We lost the battle Very badly. They killed everyone with the exception of 3 other soldiers and myself. Luckily we only brought a small army of 35. Losing 31 soldiers is a big blow though. I guess it’s off to training camp once more. I am going to work my soldiers really hard. We will not lose this battle.

November 25
         I went and talked to Demetra and her parents. I told her that I would like to marry her. She asked her parents and they said that if I defeated the Roman Empire that I could marry her. That is some real motivation for me. I will fight for Sparta and avenge Eusebios’ death.




November 28
       The past few days I have been teaching the army some strategic scenarios in case they are caught alone. We need to be able to slaughter as many warriors as possible. In order to defeat the Roman Empire we need to kill everyone. That is my plan. We need to kill any Roman we see.

November 30
       I feel like the army is improving a lot. We should be able to start the domination of Rome in at most 6 days. Realistically I think it will be more like 2 days. We have run scenarios like crazy in order to prepare the troops for the big battle. We will depart and immediately attack anybody Roman when we are prepared.

December 5
       We left today and arrived at a Roman base camp. We charged in and killed everyone. No one, no thing, no life was left. We are definitely ready. I think that the training has paid off. We completely dominated. It was utter destruction.
December 7
       It is getting cold. We hope to arrive at Rome, Italy in 3 days time. I have more to report. We have ripped through 7 more camps and left nothing behind. The domination of Rome has officially begun. Life is great right now. I wrote to Demetra to tell her of my progress. She wrote back and said she is happy we are doing so well.

December 9
       We have arrived at Rome. We are waiting until nightfall to attack. We destroyed every camp outside of the main city. This is it. This is the moment I, and every other warrior has dreamed of. Battle on Spartans!

December 10
       WE DID IT! I murdered Julius Caesar with my bare hands! We marched through Rome hacking down every person we saw. Then we arrived at Julius Caesar’s palace. I marched right in and killed the guards. It was quite a battle with the Dictator of Rome. We sword-fought for a while. It all went awry for Julius when I sliced off his left arm. He was helpless. I told him that if he dropped his sword then I would too. We both did, and then I leaped onto him and tackled him to the ground. I strangled him and he couldn’t do anything about it. He died after he suffocated.

December 15
       I married Demetra today. We are going to move to Rome in a few weeks. We will be happy together. We will no longer be in danger of being conquered. In Rome we will live in peace.

This is the end of my journal. I hope you enjoyed reading it.
Leonidas Zaro Jr. - Leonidas Zaro Jr.

Jacob Edmunds
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